{"id":2989,"date":"2009-01-15T18:22:06","date_gmt":"2009-01-15T18:22:06","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/zenpundit.com\/?p=2989"},"modified":"2009-01-15T18:43:46","modified_gmt":"2009-01-15T18:43:46","slug":"barnetts-great-powers-the-cutting-room-floor","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/?p=2989","title":{"rendered":"Barnett&#8217;s Great Powers: The Cutting Room Floor"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><strong><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.thomaspmbarnett.com\/weblog\/\">Tom&#8217;s<\/a><\/strong> new book <strong><a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/gp\/product\/0399155376?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=zenpundit-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=0399155376\">Great Powers: America and the World After Bush<\/a><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" border=\"0\" width=\"1\" src=\"http:\/\/www.assoc-amazon.com\/e\/ir?t=zenpundit-20&amp;l=as2&amp;o=1&amp;a=0399155376\" height=\"1\" style=\"margin: 0px; border: medium none\" \/>\u00a0<\/strong>is not out yet but I have read two different versions. A first draft, chapter by chapter more or less as fast as Dr. Barnett was able to write it and then a near finished but yet to be finally edited penultimate version. The second\u00a0incarnation I read\u00a0had significant structural differences from the first draft manuscript, as it should when an author works with a professional editor and publisher on a major book.<\/p>\n<p>Tom has just released some of the material that had been cut during the editing process and it&#8217;s worth a look. It&#8217;s interesting and it gives you an idea of thoughts in process for writing a large work even if ultimately, these sections\u00a0received the axe:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<h3><a href=\"http:\/\/thomaspmbarnett.com\/weblog\/2009\/01\/gp_the_lost_chapters.html\">GP: the lost chapters<\/a><\/h3>\n<p>Remember when <a href=\"http:\/\/thomaspmbarnett.com\/weblog\/2009\/01\/gp_directors_commentary_on_the.html\">Tom wrote<\/a> that the deleted chapters from <em>Great Powers<\/em> would appear online? Two are now up on International Relations and Security Nework.<\/p>\n<p>The original Chapter One is now <a href=\"http:\/\/www.isn.ethz.ch\/isn\/Current-Affairs\/Special-Reports\/Creed-of-an-American-Grand-Strategist\/Commentary\/\">Creed of an American Grand Strategist: I am a great power. And so can you!<\/a><\/p>\n<p>The subtitle was Mark Warren&#8217;s idea (an obvious link to Colbert&#8217;s book), which Tom thought was pretty funny.<\/p>\n<p>The original Chapter Two, &#8216;A-to-Z of American Grand Strategy&#8217; is now broken into four parts:<\/p>\n<p>+ <a href=\"http:\/\/www.isn.ethz.ch\/isn\/Current-Affairs\/Special-Reports\/Creed-of-an-American-Grand-Strategist\/Lexicon-A-G\/\">A lexicon deconstructed: A-G<\/a><br \/>\n+ <a href=\"http:\/\/www.isn.ethz.ch\/isn\/Current-Affairs\/Special-Reports\/Creed-of-an-American-Grand-Strategist\/Lexicon-H-M\/\">A lexicon deconstructed: H-M<\/a><br \/>\n+ <a href=\"http:\/\/www.isn.ethz.ch\/isn\/Current-Affairs\/Special-Reports\/Creed-of-an-American-Grand-Strategist\/Lexicon-N-S\/\">A lexicon deconstructed: N-S<\/a><br \/>\n+ <a href=\"http:\/\/www.isn.ethz.ch\/isn\/Current-Affairs\/Special-Reports\/Creed-of-an-American-Grand-Strategist\/Lexicon-T-Z\/\">A lexicon deconstructed: T-Z<\/a><\/p>\n<p>For now, we&#8217;re just linking to ISN. We&#8217;ll be reprinting both of these lost chapters in their entirety later in the month.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Having been both writer and an editor on a small scale, I think the natural tendency of\u00a0every writer is to cling to every word. Frequently though,\u00a0in making an important point, less really is more to the reader. A good editor clears away the clutter and let&#8217;s the writer&#8217;s best shine through with clarity.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Tom&#8217;s new book Great Powers: America and the World After Bush\u00a0is not out yet but I have read two different versions. A first draft, chapter by chapter more or less as fast as Dr. Barnett was able to write it and then a near finished but yet to be finally edited penultimate version. The second\u00a0incarnation [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[420,5,133,178,270,243,127,13],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-2989","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-authors","category-barnett","category-book","category-geopolitics","category-national-security","category-pnm","category-strategy","category-theory"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2989","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=2989"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2989\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=2989"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=2989"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/zenpundit.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=2989"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}