Pulse: a poem on setting out
[ by Charles Cameron — thunder, lightning, wind, water, moon, thanks and praise ]
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Pulse
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Like a thunderbolt out of juicy nothingness
a chord
strikes, as if
from the face before time itself, lightning:
nor
is there any measuring the impact a breeze
might ripple out across waters, each drop
containing,
constraining
its reflected ocean.
Live, then, your
lively life, be struck, dumb, gifted, wildly
giving – what else? – thanks
and praise. Not as flattering tongues praise,
but as one moon
surrenders herself, gone, crescent, whole
and shattered, across each and all
turbulent and calm waters.
Madhu:
October 25th, 2012 at 2:39 pm
Wonderful, Charles.
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“Live, then, your lovely life….”
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Very nice.
Charles Cameron:
October 25th, 2012 at 4:49 pm
Hi, Madhu:
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Thanks!
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I actually had “live, then, your lively life” because I wanted to get at the liveliness, which is what makes it lovely — also because I like all those long i sounds, lively, life, wildly…
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But if I woke up and found your version and mine sitting there together and forgot which one I’d originally chosen — I might well prefer yours!
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Thanks anyway, I always think of you when posting poems here, and hoped you’d see & like it.